A blog about my adventures and experiences in Mr. Pittman's Contemporary Communications class.
HEY THIS IS MY BLOG
My name is Grace Lillis and I am currently a student in Contemporary Communications. Last semester we worked with style and annotations. A different kind of class, Contemp teaches me real world skills and is definitely the most valuable English class I have ever taken. This blog will be used to further my education and get me ready for my future after graduation.
Friday, May 2, 2014
Thursday, May 1, 2014
Ethics and Etiquette
Ethics and Etiquette
·
ETHICS is an internal system of moral
principles; morals, principles, values
·
ETIQUETTE is an example set of manners, customs,
and tradition of a society that governs how people treat one another or act in
social situations; proper, manners,
customs, traditions, protocol, decorum
Ethics changes person to person
while etiquette changes from society to society. With a difference in ethics in
each person, it is easy to offend someone, especially someone of another
culture.
Movie Theatre
Etiquette
1.
Before The Movie
·
Buy your snacks and drinks before the film
starts. This prevents distracting other moviegoers during the screening.
·
Find your seat and turn off all electronics. It
is extremely rude to be on your phone during the movie as it distracts the
others and brings attention toward you.
·
Whisper. Although the movie has not started,
others want to listen to previews.
2.
During the Movie
·
Don’t talk. If you absolutely have to, whisper
softly as to not distract those around you.
·
Chew quietly and don’t slurp your drink. The
worst thing is trying to enjoy the movie and someone is chomping on his or her
popcorn. Keep your mouth closed and when your soda is gone, it’s gone.
·
If you must use the restroom, do it quickly and
quietly. If you are in the middle of the row, say “Excuse me” as you exit the
row.
3. After
the Movie
·
Pick up all your trash, and don’t leave anything
under the seats.
Death of a Salesman by Arthur Miller
The
characters in Death of a Salesman have questionable ethics. The Loman family
doesn’t know how to properly deal with crises.
Willy
Loman: the dad of Biff and Happy, husband of Linda, and traveling salesman
Linda
Loman: Willy’s wife and mother of Biff and Happy
Biff Loman:
Willy and Linda’s oldest son
Happy
Loman: Youngest son
These
characters unethical behaviors are seen throughout the play. Here are a few
examples:
- Happy
sleeps with married women, and is a philanderer: someone who seeks sex without
any ties
-
Happy
also goes to the weddings of the women he sleeps with to see the man she is
marrying.
- Biff
steals multiple things including a cart of basketballs, Oliver’s pen, a suit in
Kansas City, and wood for his father
- Biff
isn’t alone in stealing as his father orders him and Happy to steal wood for
the stoop
- Willy
cheated on Linda and was found by his son Biff when he was younger
- Biff
flunks school and goes to his father to talk to the teacher because it’s the
teacher’s fault
- Linda
discovers that Willy is trying to kill himself and doesn’t try and stop it
-
The
fact that Willy is trying to kill himself is also very unethical
- Biff
and Happy leave their depressed and suicidal father alone at dinner before
having dinner
- Willy
kills himself to leave money for his family
Tuesday, April 22, 2014
The Research Process
1. Find
a topic
When you are
looking for a topic, pick a few that you find interesting, but not something
you already know a lot about. After you narrow it down to one topic, make sure
your topic is not too broad, especially if you are only writing a few pages on
this topic.
2. Preliminary
Research
Throughout
school we are told not to use certain online encyclopedias (i.e. Wikipedia).
However, these can be very useful in conducting a preliminary research to help
your later research. In your preliminary research look for:
-
Names related to topic
-
Places and settings your topic takes place in/at
-
Other names your topic can be under
-
Key terms used frequently to describe topic
-
Words/phrases you know are affiliated with your
topic
This will give you basic
information to have a successful research paper.
3. Read
About It
Now that you
have some basic information, read about your topic. Academic databases and
unbiased information with credible authors are good sources of information.
This could also be a part of your preliminary research but make sure to read
credible sources with details.
4. Writing
Your Paper
a. Finding
credible sources
To make sure
your sources are academic and credible you can check a few things:
-
Currency
-
Authority- author credentials
-
Purpose
-
Objective- ask yourself, “Is this biased?”
-
Writing Style
CAPOW is an easy way to remember credibility. |
b. Summary
vs. Paraphrase
In your
paper you should have citations from credible sources. Some of them should be
word for word but most should be summarized or paraphrase. Paraphrasing means
to put the quote in your own words with the main idea AND many of the details. Summarizing
is a short review of the entire quote with just the main idea. After you
paraphrase or summarize, give credit to the source. Also, make sure to explain
the citation which should be at least the same length as your citation.
Differences between summarizing and paraphrasing. |
5. Primary
vs Secondary Sources
a. Primary
Source is an eyewitness account of someone who was actually there at the time
of the event. This can include a diary, original photographs, recordings, etc.
-
An example of a primary source is Anne Frank’s
diary
b. Secondary
Source is a report about a primary source. This includes books, articles, etc.
-
An example of a secondary source would be a book
about Anne Frank
Monday, February 10, 2014
Rhetoric
Rhetoric
Everyday we run into all types of persuasion: advertisements, articles, commercials, etc. We can determine the exigency, what is wanted to be accomplished with the persuasion, by looking at the rhetoric devices used.
· Rhetoric: using language persuasively
There are three types of rhetoric: ethos, logos, and pathos. Ethos refers to the character using ethics, morals, and right from wrong to persuade. Logos, however, uses logic to persuade. This would include facts, logical reasoning, and evidence. Then there is pathos which appeals to the emotions of the audience. This works the best because it can be related personally to the viewer and has a more influential effect on them.
Along with rhetoric, Steve Martin and Robert Cialdini explain in their video “Secrets from the Science of Persuasion,” the six shortcuts of persuasion. These six include:
- Reciprocity:
- Scarcity
- Authority
- Consistency
- Liking
- Consensus
In Devil in the White City by Erik Larson, there are many examples of rhetoric. The main characters, Burnham and Holmes show us many examples. One, for instance, takes place on page 26 when Burnham uses logos to convince his family that the house he wanted was the best choice. His logical reasoning made the family think that this was the best choice for him. Holmes uses pathos when comforting Mrs. Holton after the death of her husband. The widow was calmed by Holmes attention to emotion when “he touched her arm. He could ease her burden, he said” (37). Although he is a murderer, Mrs. Holton is persuaded by his strategies. The Devil in the White City is full of rhetoric and can be easily identified with the knowledge of ethos, logos, and pathos. For more help, you can check out Martin and Cialdini’s video at https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cFdCzN7RYbw .
Cialdini, Robert and Steve Martin. “Science of Persuasion.” Youtube. 26 November 2012. 10 January 2014. Web.
Larson, Erik. The Devil in the White City. New York: Random House, Inc., 2003. Print.
STYLE
Everyone always says that everyone is unique in their own way, but how? How do we develop a sense of individuality? It’s our personal style. The past couple days, we have explored style and how it makes us who we are. It had me thinking about who I am and how I appear to others through my clothes, looks, and personality—some of which I get from my parents, and some from outside influences.
We develop our own sense of style from an early age.
I remember when I was in the fifth grade, I was made fun of for being bigger
than all of my friends. At the age of ten I was worried about what I looked
like, what I ate, and how others viewed me. I would pick out my outfits in the
morning with one thing in mind; what does everyone else want me to wear? It
wasn’t until my sophomore year in high school that I started dressing for me.
Now it’s my senior year and I wear whatever I want. Of course I still care
about what others think of me, but how could I not?
I receive a lot of my style from my family—my mom and
sister to be specific. I have the same personality as my mom; sarcastic with
friends and family, but sweet and respectful to others. It drives me crazy when
people don’t hold the door open for others, or say “thank you”. I find myself
acting more and more like her every day. These are my inherited traits; the ones that I
do not have control over. It is a dramatic factor to my style. However, I also
have developed traits to my style. I choose the way I look by my hair,
clothing, make-up, etc. I try to stand out but not to an extreme because that
makes me uncomfortable; I don’t dye my hair crazy colors, wear outrageous and
gaudy clothing, and I don’t walk around backwards with a bird on my shoulder.
I’m not seven-feet-tall, extremely overweight, or have size twelve shoes.
However, I have blonde hair, blue eyes, five-foot-six, and am pretty “normal”
in society’s eyes.
The influences that impacted my style started when I
was young—around 3 or 4—when I started playing with Barbie dolls. I would beg
my mom for the newest and prettiest doll and I would create lives for them;
lives that I wanted to have. I was brain-washed into thinking that I needed to
be Barbie, skinny with long hair and perfect features. As a senior in high
school, these images are still in my head.
As Dave Berry describes in his feature “The Ugly Truth About Beauty,” a
real-life Barbie would be seven-feet-tall, 81 pounds—almost impossible and
extremely unhealthy. A real-life Barbie doll would be a freak, yet adolescent
girls strive to be like the plastic toy. TV, movies, and magazines filled with
celebrities and models give us more encouragement to skip a meal or go for an
extra-long run. Friends and family can also influence us greatly. A Christmas
party at my grandma’s forces me to be more conservative in what I choose to
wear; however, a concert in Lawrence would change my idea of an outfit. When my
friends and I get ready to go out, do we dress for us? Do we dress to look better
than the other girls? Or do we dress for the guys? In my opinion it’s for the
boys, but according to Berry, men don’t notice a lot of the efforts put in by
women, so what’s the point? We should
dress however we want; but if what we want is the attention of the opposite
sex, then I guess we are.
My style is influenced more by others than myself. I
have traits that I cannot control that directly change people’s perspective on
me, but more than those I have the ability to change everything about my style,
but I choose to stay on the safer side and go with the trends and flow of
everything around me, because THAT is my style.
Works Cited
Barry, Dave. “The
Ugly Truth About Beauty.” The Contemporary Reader. 8th ed. Ed. Gary Goshgarian.
New York: Pearson Longman, 2005. 75-77.
Hurtes, Sandra.
“Weighing In.” The Contemporary Reader. 8th ed. Ed. Gary Goshgarian. New York:
Pearson Longman, 2005. 58-59.
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